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Subject: %Firstname%, Your Boss Called Again
Preview: And we both know WHY…
Another month. Another "performance review."
Your boss pulled you aside again. The look in his eyes said it all.
You're losing deals you should be winning.
That $50K contract that went to your competitor because you said “alright” when they said "I need to think about it."
Not “when they said” do “after they said”
This kinda just sounds like AI slop ngl
The $75K deal that died when you couldn't handle "Your price is too high."
The $100K opportunity that slipped away because you didn't CONTROL the close.
Why is control in caps?
Each lost deal isn't just money.
It's your reputation on the line. Your confidence. Your future.
AI bro, and why don’t you just say it’s future promotions or something.
Your boss sees the numbers.
Your family feels the stress.
You know you're capable of MORE.
Bro you keep doing this thing where you mention the problem or whatever three times.
It’s alright once or twice but you’ve done it like 3 times now
The brutal truth?
You're not losing because you're not good enough…
You're losing because you're not prepared enough.
All of these sentences are super short, sound like AI, and they just have this tone where it’s like arrogant mixed with a mom telling her kid off for not eating broccoli
Idk how to describe it but i don’t like it
And it doesn’t sound like grant
While the top 1% sales reps have frameworks for every situation, you're hoping you'll say the next right thing.
And that's why you're winging it.
Just say while top 1% are blah balh you’re over there winging it
But that ends NOW.
For the next 72 hours, enrollment is open for the 10X Sales Bootcamp.
In there you get:
LIVE Sales Role-playing sessions
Objection-handling frameworks
Script-building workshops
Daily drill sheets and practice reps
Perfect follow-up strategy training
Live strategic-planning workshops
Breakout sessions for implementation
Action-plan development and accountability
Access to my VIP community of the top 1% Sales professionals
AND MUCH MORE…
Bro these are just a bunch of boring features
One deal pays for the entire thing.
What if they’re selling used socks?
This is actually a pretty good line if you’re targeting high ticket closers
You’ve already lost way more than that this quarter.
65% of the available seats have already been taken so,
Secure your seat in the 10X Sales Bootcamp NOW
Make this a full sentence bro
Stop letting those sweet deals slip away, %Firstname%.
Your boss is watching. Your team is watching. It's time to DELIVER.
Grant Cardone.
P.S. Last bootcamp students increased their closes by 34% in their first 30 days.
Peter joined our community and went from bottom of his team to #2 in 60 days. Your transformational story awaits you…
But only if you JOIN NOW
Again bro this is just average AI slop
Use full sentences
John
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